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Careful

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Author etdeshon
Tags author:etdeshon playable race unrated
Created 2007-04-10
Last Modified 2007-04-10
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Description post some comments, ratings, and demos. tell me stuff that could help me or if you think this level is cool or not.

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Mirrored Path As easy as 123 Go with the Flow Go with the Flow(revised) Another Short Race Mine Racer 2

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refers to your map making "career" so to speak. "you should have that sort of outlook" refers to how you should approach criticism. im a musician so i know how to deal with subjectiveness. hope i helped. wow, that was the longest post i have ever put. ever.....
however, for the rest of the race, the flow is quite nice. the timing is excellent and it is above average considering other maps that people put on numa (like mine for example, i deleted all of mine cause they suck so dont feel too bad)as you progress as a mapmaker, youll find your own style and how to make maps that people will like. its just the beginning and have that sort of outlook. i wish people would put constructive criticism instead of harsh comments *cough*jimmymcnabb*cough*. however, you will find that the people who will make you improve will be the people that do not like your maps. if they are reasonable, they will give constructive criticism and you should really use as much as you can from it. keep this map on numa so that you have something to work from and you can work from your mistakes. hope this was part of your daily dose of encouragement. good luck in the future. 3/5. i want good stuff from you later on.
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Just ignore him

he's a jerk


Nice map though. I would do some things different like not putting the gold halfway in the tiles, and the top part where you jump up and down ruins the flow (you shouldn't do that, you should be able to run the whole race), but other than that, its a pretty good level.

2/5 (It is below average, sorry :-/ )
people like you who bag on other people because they arent as good as you. at least im trying!
flowless maps like this
2/5