kijé's wedding
This map was featured on 2015-03-17
I'll be honest: I have no idea what the title stands for or if the design has any deeper meaning but this is pretty damn cool for a Vehemence map.
When I saw this while searching for new possible features, I immediately remembered how I played it a few months ago. So this map definitely has its own charme. And because Vehemence forces you to do 25 maps in 24 hours, it's even better.
You don't need to go to a wedding and marry this map. I was first. You can still post your demos, though.
— Chrdrenkmann
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this map is stylin! the only thing i want to forever hold is all that gold. i'll hold my peace some other day
2015-03-18
It's okay...
just, if you could please make sure you get at least one other person to check over your reviews for spelling and grammar, it would be much appreciated. :)
2015-03-18
@ska
It's evident for a native speaker, of course. But not if the word has a different spelling with the exact same pronunciation in German. :D
BTW
I'd also consider using more commas to control the flow of
your words. For instance, please consider this alternative:
I'll be honest: I have no idea what the title stands for, or if the design has any deeper meaning, but this is pretty damn cool for a Vehemence map.
"So this map definitely has its own charme"
I thought the spelling error was pretty evident, but oh well...
I'd also consider using more commas to control the flow of
your words. For instance, please consider this alternative:
I'll be honest: I have no idea what the title stands for, or if the design has any deeper meaning, but this is pretty damn cool for a Vehemence map.
"So this map definitely has its own charme"
I thought the spelling error was pretty evident, but oh well...
2015-03-18
@zoasBE
Yeah, you criticize me all the damn time so it's not even a thing for me anymore, you know. (And I saw that you do it on other people's maps as well).
@ska: Where is the spelling error? That would have been actually helpful.
@ska: Where is the spelling error? That would have been actually helpful.
2015-03-18
Hmmm...
Unfortunately, I tend to agree with ZoasBE...
The written review tells me absolutely nothing about the map or its gameplay. The fact the review had a spelling error also indicates to me that it wasn't properly proofread.
The written review tells me absolutely nothing about the map or its gameplay. The fact the review had a spelling error also indicates to me that it wasn't properly proofread.
2015-03-18
I like the tileset
I want to mess around with it at some point.
I am not criticizing the map choices themselves, which are obviously subjective, if not the enthusiasm and quality of your reviews. It seems that you review by compromise, or feature any random apere at apparently looks cool and you found it casually, and the worst is thaINE en is you who talks about that yourself in the review itself. Not to mention the lack of emotion and effort on them, latent on the pulse of your writing, imho.
2013-01-06
AGD.
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2013-01-06
this looks so cool
the perspective is kinda trippy
lifdoff
I love this.