Misty Sun
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2009-10-12
a'ight
to be honest I really liked that. Aesthetics, in my opinion, still need a bit of work, but have definitely improved from your recent races. Also I like the use of bounce blocks. Top left bit was hard. 4.5^
2009-10-11
This is really good
Definately one of the best either of you have done, but it does lack a certain sheen.
I think said 'sheen' could be attained by using a more consistent and dominating theme. If that doesnt make sense, think of it like this. When you see a riobe race, you know it's riobe before you play it. That's because all his races have (more or less) the same theme.
That's okay for Riobe cos his theme rocks. That aside, you know what i'm getting at. If i couldnt see the author of this map, i wouldnt be able to decide if it was a rit, matty, geckos, or etdeshon race.
Moral of what turned into a small essay: Be more bold and striking with your themes when making a race. Make everything fit the theme. Objects and flow included.
I think said 'sheen' could be attained by using a more consistent and dominating theme. If that doesnt make sense, think of it like this. When you see a riobe race, you know it's riobe before you play it. That's because all his races have (more or less) the same theme.
That's okay for Riobe cos his theme rocks. That aside, you know what i'm getting at. If i couldnt see the author of this map, i wouldnt be able to decide if it was a rit, matty, geckos, or etdeshon race.
Moral of what turned into a small essay: Be more bold and striking with your themes when making a race. Make everything fit the theme. Objects and flow included.
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2009-10-11
Very nice. :]
The aesthetics are pretty good, I only dislike the 4-tile in the top left and the half loop on the bottom right , they don't feel right :/... Anyway, the flow is nice and the enemies are well-placed and... 4.5v ^^
2009-10-11
GREGOR says...
Generic RacE Grading O' Rubric (GREGOR)
Subscore Section
Fun Value: 8/10. Comments: Pretty fun, and there aren't too many frustrations.
Flowiness: 8/10. Comments: Good (but not awesome) flow the whole way through.
Aesthetics: 5/6. Comments: Good graphics.
(8+8+5)/6 = 3.5/4 *subscore*
Multiplier Section: Scored in increments of x0.05
Originality : x1.05. Comments: Some interesting ideas---for example, the trampoline business---but not really too original.
Well-Integration : x1.10. Comments: Good (but not impressive) enemy positioning and reuse.
Replay Value : x1.0. Comments: Nope.
Other Gimmicks : x1.0. Comments: None.
3.5 multiplied by all multipliers = 4.04/5
This is definitely a good race, but it's not too impressive.
Subscore Section
Fun Value: 8/10. Comments: Pretty fun, and there aren't too many frustrations.
Flowiness: 8/10. Comments: Good (but not awesome) flow the whole way through.
Aesthetics: 5/6. Comments: Good graphics.
(8+8+5)/6 = 3.5/4 *subscore*
Multiplier Section: Scored in increments of x0.05
Originality : x1.05. Comments: Some interesting ideas---for example, the trampoline business---but not really too original.
Well-Integration : x1.10. Comments: Good (but not impressive) enemy positioning and reuse.
Replay Value : x1.0. Comments: Nope.
Other Gimmicks : x1.0. Comments: None.
3.5 multiplied by all multipliers = 4.04/5
This is definitely a good race, but it's not too impressive.
2009-10-11
nice collab
good job :)
2009-10-11
I always screw up
at that same bit lol, getting better :)
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2009-10-11
Pretty fun!
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2009-10-11
This drone
really annoyed me, kept dieing by it lol, also i didnt like where you put the mines, however. i loved the flow and gold placement and loved the use of tileset :) the best and most funnest pit was at the start. 5/5 :) enjoyed it so much. faved
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2009-10-11
this is cool
:D 4aved
MattyMc13
it's ok