A sad day
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| Author | Diamondeye |
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| Tags | action author:diamondeye chaingun decorative unrated |
| Created | 2009-04-22 |
| Last Modified | 2009-04-22 |
| Rating | 4 more votes required for a rating. |
| Map Data | |
| Description | A single flower / by a desolate grave / Raindrops mix with tears
A small haiku poem, and a small "decorative" map. Feedback is welcome. |
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The tileset is cool. But the spammed objects are awful....
2009-04-22
Great progression.
The idea is really cool. A few things that didn't really work:
- The door key in the gold looked ugly. I would've had it in a separate location.
- The three things that look 'nooby' (forgive my use of the word) are the single one way, having two locked doors in that fashion and the three by three block of gold.
- The combination of thwump and chainguns didn't really work. First waiting for the thwump to arrive, and then when it did, the chainguns didn't do very much.
On a plus side, the circling drones were really good.
- The door key in the gold looked ugly. I would've had it in a separate location.
- The three things that look 'nooby' (forgive my use of the word) are the single one way, having two locked doors in that fashion and the three by three block of gold.
- The combination of thwump and chainguns didn't really work. First waiting for the thwump to arrive, and then when it did, the chainguns didn't do very much.
On a plus side, the circling drones were really good.
2009-04-22
Example map:
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2009-04-22
The idea of this map is good.
Now you need just to perform a good map out of it. I didn´t think the gameplay was bad, so here smth. about the tileset: To let it be "cool" just do something you think is cool. To let it look cool, add some "style" to it. Style is a kind of tiles that is all over the map the same. In this map you have raindrop tiles, slim tiles and ground floor mixed up. You also wanted to draw a picture with the tiles, but their proportions just aren´t original.
What I mean with this is that you can make n-maps, you just need to perform them a bit better and you´ll have funny maps.
P.S. Don´t take this too hard: It´s just my opininon.
What I mean with this is that you can make n-maps, you just need to perform them a bit better and you´ll have funny maps.
P.S. Don´t take this too hard: It´s just my opininon.
Diamondeye
considering the remake
And L_D, thanks for the feedback. I follow on all three points.