is too disrupted and static. needs more butter. transitions between sections are imperfect; the sections do not perfectly connect. tileset seems incomplete, as is the atmosphere. the empty spaces need filling. there's the criticism i said i would give! ;)

Nice collab partner you got :)

Mind checking out my latest map? Its been completely ignored and I know you dont mind advertising :P

I WANNA DO A COLLAB WITH YOU!!!

just in case you were confused, that comment has nothing to do with your map. I'll be posting your tileset soon

I think I'll use this for Green. I'll give you a tileset for existing, but you have to playtest this for me and tell me what needs polishing. That means I'll have to delist all 5 of the old ones!

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i apologize for not getting to this review lol. i'll get to it soon...hopefully...

Other than that it was good. 4/5
*advertises his awesome new map*

A bit sketchy. If you go to fast, you hit the thwumps, pushing you through the one-ways, and into the mines. Also, the path is not that straight forward. Pretty nice otherwise tho'. 3/5

good though.
!!!!!!!!!!!

can't do it.

=(

It would be cooler if you could make a race where you could jump through the thwumps. I understood the flow.

i'll give a more full review soon. i'm at school, though, so i need to be off for now.

made me think it was an etdeshon race. turns out not. it's meh.

Cool idea for a race, I was so tempted to try and shoot through the thwumps :P 3.5 up