This map is good for a first try compared to those other people's I've seen... I'd rather not think about those maps... But the main thing is don't layer objects so thickly like that, i.e. those one ways at the center-bottom and the thwumps.

couldnt beat it.... ill rate it when beat

The idea is pretty good. However, something went really messed up with the map code. There are line breaks every so often, which totally messed it up. Not unplayable, but I had to warn you.

Anyway, the thwumps were rather counterintuitive, and it took a while for me to notice I could dodge them. From then on, the map was rather good. My only gripe was the inner parts: the walljumping up was rather stuttery, and you did not have to layer the mines.

Don't think I don't like this map, though. It's still very, very good for your first map. I award this a 3.5 out of 5. It could use some work, but it's still a good map. You definitely thought this out.

Playing now.