Prisoner
Author | Derax |
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Tags | action author:derax playable rated |
Created | 2005-06-19 |
Rating |
2 by 5 people.
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Map Data | |
Description | Hi my names Derax I've made this map to see how people can help me approve on my mapmaking. Please comment and rate(high or low) I just want to approve.
I'm only 12 sorry if i spelt anything wrong. |
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2005-06-19
A solid first map.
I'll give you a "scientifical" 3.
2005-06-19
Writing could be better
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2005-06-19
wait
u get a 2
2005-06-19
Im 12 too...
i didnt like how u had to start moving so soon.
and also on the right bottom corner i went half way in the one way door... let the drones pass me... and got out... so a flaw here
and also on the right bottom corner i went half way in the one way door... let the drones pass me... and got out... so a flaw here
2005-06-19
Oh, by the way
I'm thirteen, Maniak's only twelve as well.
2005-06-19
2.5/5
for your first map, it's not bad. i'd like some more freedom, but not bad. your "a" looks like a "d", however.
Maniak
Heck,
Anyway, a lot of people on NUMA like open maps. Claustrophobic maps, unless they're the actual theme of the whole thing, tend not to be fun.
Also, when you're starting out, start with easy maps. If you can beat them every time, or maybe even every other time, then people will tend to start rating them better than crazy difficult maps. Wait until you develop a good reputation before starting to make more difficult maps.