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Author	Haldor
Tags	action author:haldor playable unrated
Created	2007-06-10
Rating	2 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	This is my first map, so understandably it isn't very hard, but there you go

Well done on your first map.

Great placement of gold and keys.
Here are some pointers -

1. HHave a bit more gold.
2. Place a few more enemies - laser drones and tracking drones are my faves
3. Use your space well! You have it, use it. Large empty spaces make the level look easy. :) But in that respect, that doesn't mean fill the whole space with enemies.
4. Evil_Bob is right - keys under gold is a no-no.

Welcome to NUMA! :)

ineedalife

2008-05-20

wow

very good landscaping for a first-timer

Why_Me

2007-06-10

Very good first map,

better than most people's. One hint; it's a little bare in some of the rooms. Other than that, great work, I can tell you're gonna be very good if you work for it. 4/5 =P

walrus_of_death

2007-06-10

A problem:

You only need to get one key.

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Demo Data

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Evil_Bob

2007-06-10

Good for a first map.

Pointer - Don't place gold over keys. Most people don't like it. That is mostly style.

Magicorange25

2007-06-10

You're getting the idea.

It's a good first map in that it shows that you have some experience: it's not overloaded and you actually worked on the tileset presenting some difficulty on its own. My suggestion is to add some more enemies and gold. I can see you making some good maps in the future. Just be sure to playtest a lot. 4/5

Welcome to NUMA!

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My first map

Comments

Great job!

wow

Very good first map,

A problem:

Good for a first map.

You're getting the idea.