Octagonal 3
Author | tmandjievdo |
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Tags | author:tmandjievdo drones laser octagonal unrated |
Created | 2018-12-03 |
Last Modified | 2018-12-03 |
Rating | 2 more votes required for a rating. |
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Description | This is the first level I ever submitted on NUMA. It contains 2 laser drones |
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2018-12-04
Forgot to mention,
I rated it 4/5.
2018-12-04
Welcome to NUMA!
This map is pretty good for a first. I have a few comments about it.
Strengths of this map: 1. It's very structured. There are no nasty surprises, so the flow is maintained through the entire map. 2. The laser drones provide entertainment and make an otherwise static map into an adventure that develops as you go along. This is a good thing. 3. It looks good.
Weaknesses: 1. Patterns are okay, but try to vary the way you use them. To get an idea of this, look at some well-known mappers like DaggaFork, Yahoozy, or ska. 2. The mines on the ceiling are practically harmless. Especially the ones further away from the Launchpad. Don't waste objects.
I hope that helps.
Strengths of this map: 1. It's very structured. There are no nasty surprises, so the flow is maintained through the entire map. 2. The laser drones provide entertainment and make an otherwise static map into an adventure that develops as you go along. This is a good thing. 3. It looks good.
Weaknesses: 1. Patterns are okay, but try to vary the way you use them. To get an idea of this, look at some well-known mappers like DaggaFork, Yahoozy, or ska. 2. The mines on the ceiling are practically harmless. Especially the ones further away from the Launchpad. Don't waste objects.
I hope that helps.
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Mohit_Ghune
Welcome to NUMA
4/5