Pico Works
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| Author | Quasi |
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| Tags | author:quasi fun medium perplex puzzle rated tricky |
| Created | 2013-08-14 |
| Last Modified | 2013-08-14 |
| Rating |
3 by 11 people.
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| Map Data | |
| Description | This is my first map, so please feel free to leave comments, criticism and advice below. Also, I'm hoping to snag some points at the NumaCon, so wish me luck!~ |
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i feel like i know exactly what kind of map you tried to make here: a sort of hard, closed in prison-escape type map. trying to compare it to some kind of generic "good map" and demanding open spaces when that would defeat the purpose.
well crafted, not perfect, but i like it a lot!
well crafted, not perfect, but i like it a lot!
The thumbnail looked pretty good but when you actually get into this map it play really poorly. In future don't put mines in such precarious nooks which are penalising the player for merely falling accidentally. Mines should be used to disadvantage players for more technical reasons.
Corridors and chimneys are a useful structure to incorporate into maps however they work best in isolation and not in such a way that they dominate the players experience. Use big, wide, open spaces intermingled with these tunnels to get a far more enjoyable playing experience.
You've got a couple of good trigger and wait thwump mechanics which is good but due to the small space and annoying mines they really lose their quality.
Overall, a good first attempt, I would rate this at about a 2 (But won't because it would pull it off the front page a lot faster).
Corridors and chimneys are a useful structure to incorporate into maps however they work best in isolation and not in such a way that they dominate the players experience. Use big, wide, open spaces intermingled with these tunnels to get a far more enjoyable playing experience.
You've got a couple of good trigger and wait thwump mechanics which is good but due to the small space and annoying mines they really lose their quality.
Overall, a good first attempt, I would rate this at about a 2 (But won't because it would pull it off the front page a lot faster).
2013-08-15
Welcome to NUMA!!!
You'll have lots of fun here :)
I might check this out later--it looks pretty good for a first
I might check this out later--it looks pretty good for a first
2013-08-14
welcome to numa!
have fun here c:
2013-08-14
Welcome to NUMA!
Looks very nice.
Quasi
Thanks
I'll be sure to get some more maps coming along