Y Tomb

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Author	deep_blue
Tags	author:deep_blue fun tomb unrated
Created	2010-11-21
Last Modified	2010-11-21
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lsudny

2010-11-21

First try.

Agreed with lori, work more on your tilesets, use gold/tiles patterns and think about the concept behind the map.

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lori_csabi

2010-11-21

ok I think I know what your problem is..

you make maps to fast
try thinking more on the concept,.. you know how your gona get that gold, how you gona finish.. you know stuf like that
the tiles: try making them the same almosty everywhere..
I mean if you put in it 'bendy' tiles then make it a bendy tileset.. (you probabli didn't understand thata.. whatever
try drowing your maps first (on paper) then make them don't hurry to reach 100 maps..
!!playtest them!! make sure all gold is possible
this is certainly one of your best ones yet..3.5/5