First Race
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| Author | crytek5000 |
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| Tags | action author:crytek5000 gold hard race rated |
| Created | 2010-06-04 |
| Last Modified | 2010-06-04 |
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2 by 5 people.
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| Description | This is my first race level I've made! please play. |
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2011-02-07
haha i hated finding out
that the switch was hidden :P
not terrible for a first map, but cut down on object (ab)use. a race should flow from the tiles and a players own jumps, try and avoid forcing it with jumppads.
im not going to rate it one way or another :)
not terrible for a first map, but cut down on object (ab)use. a race should flow from the tiles and a players own jumps, try and avoid forcing it with jumppads.
im not going to rate it one way or another :)
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2010-06-07
Welcome to NUMA
2010-06-06
pretty much
what iban said
2010-06-04
Third Try
The upper section bothered me too much to try again. But my main problem here is it is NOT a race.
Type race in the search bar at the top of the page and play a few actual races to get the hang of what a race is. Good race authors like destiny really know how to make a map that fits the race genre. The most important part of races is flow. if you have to stop or slow down to get to the next part, it is not a good race. Good races also don't have launchpads like this.
But hey its your first one, and its not a really bad first one like mine either. ;)
Welcome to NUMA! :D
Type race in the search bar at the top of the page and play a few actual races to get the hang of what a race is. Good race authors like destiny really know how to make a map that fits the race genre. The most important part of races is flow. if you have to stop or slow down to get to the next part, it is not a good race. Good races also don't have launchpads like this.
But hey its your first one, and its not a really bad first one like mine either. ;)
Welcome to NUMA! :D
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2010-06-04
First try
Didn't make it, didn't want to sit around waiting for the map to load again.
I've been here for a good five or so years, so let me offer you some constructive criticism. You don't need NEARLY as many objects as you used. Mines, launchpads, gold, etc. Cut down on em. Look at other highly rated maps for examples. Also, people don't like it when you hide things (like the switch to get to the key), so I wouldn't recommend doing it. Other than that, not really a bad map, but not a good one either. No rating.
I've been here for a good five or so years, so let me offer you some constructive criticism. You don't need NEARLY as many objects as you used. Mines, launchpads, gold, etc. Cut down on em. Look at other highly rated maps for examples. Also, people don't like it when you hide things (like the switch to get to the key), so I wouldn't recommend doing it. Other than that, not really a bad map, but not a good one either. No rating.
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eNlightened
and here with style