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Author	timothefreerunner
Tags	author:timothefreerunner finaladventure master medium race unrated
Created	2010-03-28
Last Modified	2010-03-28
Rating	4 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	Corruption of the droid factory by the ninja leads to a lockdown of the fortress, leaving only one route of exit. This final test is where our hero’s enemies make their last stand.

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2: Outnumbered	3: Colossus	4: Fortress Entrance	5: Hallway of Destruction	6: Arena	7: Drone Factory

This map didn't start out as a race, but it turned out to have parts like a race. I wanted the look to feel open and epic. The lower right is a mini KRA, so yeah, it kinda ruins the flow. The gold was meant to be separate, so a AGD would have a completely different feel.

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Demo Data

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im_bad_at_N

2010-03-29

What XY said

This really needs some work to be called a "race" map. The flow has to be constant and consistent to be really good. Only add enemies in limited amounts as it fires late if it doesn't. Really try working on aesthetics too ;D

I think you have some strong potential, just work on a few things ;D

Thanks for commenting on my new map :D

2010-03-29

For a race map

this didn't play good at all...

1. Remove unnecessary objects.
2. Make the path more clearer (show it with gold etc.).
3. Put gold only at places which are in the flow path, so that all the gold is gettable without breaking the flow.
4. The enemies shouldn't kill you when you're doing everything right. (Look at the demo)
5. The top left is impossible without breaking the flow.
6. You see - the ninja should generally never be forced to leave the flow path, it should always move.
7. Play races of authors like _destiny^- [nmaps.net], rit0987 [nmaps.net] and da_man894 to see how you can improve aesthetics and flow.

I hope this helps :]

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Demo Data

Sunset

2010-03-28

looks bad

but plays really good. kinda like a sept map.

8: Last Stand

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Comments

Thanks for the advice

What XY said

For a race map

looks bad