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And From The Earth There Came A Cry

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Author Mute_Monk
Tags author:mute_monk cry earth floorguard gauss unrated
Created 2009-12-09
Last Modified 2009-12-13
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Description "A cry of torment, a cry of pain / A cry that rang again and again"

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Thanks

For the advice...I've edited it, perhaps made it better?
But it was depressingly lackluster.
I think this would have worked with more than one enemy and something that moved. A gauss at the bottom of the funnel with the mines over the top of it would have been a nice touch with the laser drone gone, methinks.
I found the switches to be for naught, almost. I felt this would have been better if there were no locked doors and nothing (except the mines) from keeping you going places. Open up the map a bit and allow for some creativity when people play it!

looked pretty cool, played pretty bad
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Edited accordingly. Thanks.

ummm....

lol.
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Close.

but no cigar.
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Very nice. I Googled to no avail, so I assumed you might have written it. It reminds me of the cathartic ending (near-ending) to Heart of Darkness.

Me.

It's a poem I'm in the midst of writing.

What are you quoting?