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asia jack

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Author steez
Tags action author:steez unrated
Created 2009-08-19
Last Modified 2009-08-19
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Description this was inspired by an assload of people but it isn't quite finished. i might make it into two maps. the computer i'm on doesn't have word or notepad so i hafta submit it. feedback would be nice.

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oooh

karma's jealous

As I said in the description, it's not close to being finished. I have nothing to save it on so I decided to submit what I had

This is very unrefined. Finish and playtest the map before submitting it. The mines floating above the floor are ugly and some mines aren't even surpassable, as said by others. You're missingthe exit aswell and the oneway looks ugly, some use of thwump would be better.

awesome

maybe remove the mine closest to the left most door switch? the one I hit in the demo
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otherwise quite good. I really enjoyed the initial descent. You've outgrown petty inspiration, I challenge you to make something original!

oh!

i know this, it's ld!
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