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Author blackwhite
Tags action author:blackwhite playable race unrated
Created 2008-08-15
Last Modified 2008-08-15
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Description first race

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Weird

the beggining was tricky, but I figured out what to do and got all the gold!!!

woah, im fastest

didnt even try...
rest was awesome, especially so for a first

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ok..

i like it... for a first, its pretty good! there is one thing that kinda bothered me though...

the part right after the first loop. you expect them to jump and go to another loop which gives you gold then you come back and hit the spring... you should make it a need to do that instead of making it only with gold... put like a door in there or something...

thats just what i didnt like, but hey, its your first race. ill give you a 4/5! demo on NReality

Remarkable Start!

keep at it!
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4/5

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Actually,

I'm impressed.
For your first race, it's pretty good. Usually, people start out with boring, seriously enclosed spaces.

The flow could use some work in places, like near the bottom section coming into the chaingun loop

And also, close calls are good for races. If you include too many loops in your races, it's a lot harder to create those awesome close calls.

Nice map though 4/5
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demo

demo in nreality too
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