Dead Star
Author | hughstiaan |
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Tags | author:hughstiaan dead fun playable race star unrated |
Created | 2008-07-24 |
Last Modified | 2008-07-25 |
Rating | 2 more votes required for a rating. |
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Description | im gona stop counting how many races iv made on our account...
"this is another race that i've made on our account" is what im going to be saying from now on :D :D anyway... hope you like it... and as usual, if you dont, tell me how i could improve it :) |
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2008-07-24
Agree with Riobe.
It's too loopy - it's just the same old running around in circles. You need something fresh to keep people excited. Trace out the routes you have, and the routes some of the best race-makers have, such as destiny [nmaps.net], Bunniesandsheep [nmaps.net], MARIJNENANDRIES [nmaps.net], and Psycho_CO [nmaps.net], and compare them. You'll see the difference. I also didn't like the enemy placement and gold arrangement. There was too much gold, making it take quite a while to load, and the pattern you arranged it in was too cramped and ugly. With the enemies, you seem to have just placed them wherever you could fit them. Try to place them effectively to get a good atmosphere and maybe some close calls, too. Less can become more in this case.
2008-07-24
Who's our?
Just wondering.
Still too loopy. 2
Would you like some advice?
Still too loopy. 2
Would you like some advice?
autosurfer
2/5