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Velvet Drifter

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Author Mechtradevil
Tags action author:mechtradevil bitesized drifter playable rated velvet
Created 2007-11-03
Last Modified 2007-11-03
Rating
4
by 19 people.
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Description Puddle-soaked jeans
pilled with charcoal black
on the railing she leans,
o'er the Portland track.

Chrome-green sheen so unforeseen
she paints with a typical velvet
Stroke,
perched deftly over the stone ravine;
sketching townhouse chimney
Smoke.

November is dark and done
she paints the season's boon;
she was the only one
to glimpse the Halfling moon.

Out of the darkness that keeps away
the night's too-soon
Demise,
she sees that the morning on the bay
will tenderly
Arise.

~Me

The last map in my 'Drifter' series, it's perhaps not a proper conclusion. But I feel better.
Please rate, comment, and demo.
Dedicated to Mekkah.

1st in the series: Tolstoy Drifter http://numa.notdot.net/map/100064

2nd in the series: System Drifter
http://numa.notdot.net/map/100362
^^^
I've often considered this to be my best map; check it out. :P

Other maps by this author

Thumbnail of the map 'Dead You Are Rusted' Thumbnail of the map 'Grind' Thumbnail of the map 'No Excuses' Thumbnail of the map 'The Last Time' Thumbnail of the map 'Pie Donkey' Thumbnail of the map 'Johnny Boy, He Carry a Gun'
Dead You Are Rusted Grind No Excuses The Last Time Pie Donkey Johnny Boy, He Carry a Gun

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Heheh

AGD!
...
This map is soooo old.
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and found that so many are so similar.. it kinda gets boring
and maybe try a race again, i mean many of your actions are so flowy you may as well make another
umm i dunno

I'm tired and stuff...

my map making ability is gone

I think yours has stayed, but also stayed the same
um yeah

mm... zzzzzzz...
well for one, yes it's by the shins

and rate wise.. dunno look through my favs to see what i like i guess, sorry, if you don't want me to rate your maps say the word

i guess i've made my standards higher because before i was more comparing them to my maps and now since im not making many maps i compare the map to the whole of numa..

i wouldn't mind trying a collab if ya want btw, but dont expect toooo much, i cant really do anything special anymore it seems :/

if it helps ill look through most of your maps and find my favs
but somehow I died on the thwump...
:P
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Rather fun...

I would have preferred it though if theere was a bit more open space.
Still, it's wel thought out and it flows nicely.

agd

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hah

thanks reefer, but it looks like you need to watch my demo...

fuck the end,

4,
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4
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Fucking amazing

This map makes sex seem painfull and boring.
okay, maybe I egsagerated A BIT (you can tell by my spelling somehtings wrong) but 9999999avesizedificould

thank you

More comments! More, more!
sorry for triple post........:p

*ohhhhh*

just saw that it was a ded to me!


Thanks Mechtra! You're awesome!!!
I agree that the other was better.


4/5
Nooo, darn thwump propelled me (look at demo)
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i checked them out

and i left a little something for you on System Drifter....

wow,

if you liked this one that much, you GOTTA check out system drifter... it's a bit harder, I think, but soooo much better! It had a 5 average before being sniped. Thank you!

sloooooow AGD

love this level! i would say this is my favourite of your maps. Good to see your better. 5/5avedsized
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4.5aved

Trippy tileset (in a good way), gameplay was nice, and just great overall.

Fantastic AG demo

Check it out for instruction on passing the lower floor thwump; it's not hard but it requires a little speed and proper jump timing. You don't have to do it exactly as in my demo, but you DO definitely have to jump. Yah? Anyway, watch it first or see if you can figure it out yourself; either way, submit your own demos!
Thanks guys!
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