NUMA

My First Level

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Author Bakon
Tags action author:bakon easy playable power race rated
Created 2007-10-04
Rating
3
by 7 people.
Map Data
Description This is (As follows from the name) My first map on N.
Please rate and give constructive critisism... how else am I going to get better? :P
I think it is pretty fun (Though very easy if you pass that rocket thing in the top left corner), and I apologise for the random rocket out of the screen, it just... appeared there and didn't want to get deleted. Ah well, more special effects.
Enjoy, rate, and critisize hard :)

Bakon

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dAaZnfr3aK
2007-10-04

I don't see what is wrong with NaN's.

Seriously, what is wrong? Just because "noobs" (including me, so don't get offended), when they start, don't know how to delete them. Then seven_two helped me, and then we realise. Personally, there is no need for criticism and less rating because of NaN's. Geez, overtime, people will realise, but for those beginning players that don't understand, Go easy!

I reckon the map was ok. 3.5

T3chno
2007-10-04

For your first level..

excellent flow, not the best however.
Remove the messed up rockets too.
3.5 as your first.
You can definitely improve. And when you do, you'll be great.

The_Amoeba
2007-10-04

3.5/5

Cool. I just made my first level and put it up here as well.

I like how simple it is, its a nice change from alot of these maps with flow that is so hard to find (like my map, hypocritically).

I would say, make it a little bit more race like by having him never really slow down. Also, only include drones in a race if they are perfectly placed so that they ALMOST hit you or ALMOST shoot you if you are doing the race correctly. Otherwise they just slow it down. Otherwise fun, I liked the gold placement.

A n00b giving advice to a n00b. Yay!

purple_ninja
2007-10-04

sorted out the NaN rocket

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Quick_Lightnin
2007-10-04

.....

it was ok for your first map lol

SecretGlitch
2007-10-04

Because it's your first map

I gave you a 2.5 because the map wasn't dreadful. But those two rockets are called NaNs. (If a map has an NaN in it, it will kill your rating, btw.) The flow was par until the room with the gausses, then the flow just stopped. Also, the map doesn't look pretty, so add style to your future maps. If this wasn't your first map, however, you'd be getting 0-1.5 out of 5.

But at least this is better than some other crap floating around NUMA.

player_03
2007-10-04

That turret slows things down.

Delete it to speed them up:
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blaze-N
2007-10-04

Welcome

About the level. I sort of got confused about the flow right after the chaingun drone part and there should be trap doors on the other side after the laser area. Most of the enemies didn't present any threat at all (half of them didn't do anything).

But it's your first level it can only get better.
Since you said criticize hard 3.5/5