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DDA Thwump

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Author PyroBeaver
Tags author:pyrobeaver dda unrated
Created 2006-01-17
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Description This is my first DDA so I'd really appreciate the advice.
I only want criticism if it's constructive.

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osldgoth
2006-01-17

Good start

I like how you have some thump propultion. that is good. try using trap doors instead of launch pads. after making the tile set, you need to put enemies in the level. Then you make N bounce around the enemies using the thumps, trapdoors etc. etc. thus making close calls I'm not sure what the line of door are for. you don't need them. also try not to have gold delay, if you must have some make it short. overall, it is a short map, you don't use every thing in the lvl(namely the launch pads in the bottom left courner), no close calls... so for your first DDA I gave it a 1.5 or a 2, I forget.