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Author	rit0987
Tags	author:rit0987 father fun ned playable race rated
Created	2009-05-23
Last Modified	2009-05-23
Rating	4 by 12 people.
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Description	I tried to make a longer race reusing some sections and that made it a bit weird. Again I ask: Do you see an improvement? Tips are welcome RCE!

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Booster

2009-05-27

At first

I couldn't work out the track until I looked at GNOTHERGNU's demo.
I would've rated it 2 if I hadn't looked at GNOTHERGNU's demo
but since I looked at GNOTHERGNU's demo I anm rating it 3.6/5

GNOTHERGNU

2009-05-23

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MattyMc13

2009-05-23

I agree that you need to work on aesthetics

and just experiment, kinda like I'm doing. You have a really good hang of creating good flow, but you kinda put too much gold in some places, and that looked ugly. But your races are getting better, in terms of flow and difficulty.
3/5
Also, would you mind rating my map Weaponry [nmaps.net]?

Geckos

2009-05-23

meh

not as good as ur others.
some parts i c where the flow was, but u could never rly jump high enough, breaking the flow.
anyway, advice is same as i always say : )
aexsthetics and make flow more exciting.
3

boonie92

2009-05-23

yeah i suppose

the flow also isn't perfect....but i can't perfect either of those things...so keep on trying...'ll get there.

rit0987

2009-05-23

so I need to work on aesthetics?
:D

boonie92

2009-05-23

what he said

...flow was pretty solid...and the aesthetics weren't really. The bottom also seemed a little long and actionless

3/5...

handofgod

2009-05-23

i messed up

look at some of destiny's races and try to make your own a little more aesthetically pleasing.
Besides that the play was good.
3

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