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Author	demonface
Tags	action author:demonface beatable finished medium playable unrated
Created	2009-04-26
Last Modified	2009-04-26
Rating	3 more votes required for a rating.
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Description	My first map, i know it sucks but im still getting to grips with everything :\ Lazers are my favorite kind of drone, so i made this.

This shows a bit of promise for your first map. I agree with Tunco that there are some unneeded objects, but the flow of the level isn't too bad. If you play other people's maps a lot, it'll give you some good ideas to make better maps. Also, if you have questions feel free to ask. Most of the people here are pretty cool about it.

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Demo Data

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Tunco123

2009-04-26

OK.

Kinda nice for your first map, but I think you should take out unneeded objects.

And Welcome to Numa!

Lazer-Nightmare

Comments

Welcome to NUMA.

OK.