My First
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| Author | combsz91 |
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| Tags | author:combsz91 easy first rated |
| Created | 2009-02-03 |
| Last Modified | 2009-02-03 |
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4 by 8 people.
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| Description | Hey this is my first map. I'm just trying to get the hang of the map creator so cut me some slack. |
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2009-02-04
Faster
A good first map
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welcome to numa! first of all= the question mark? not needed..
it was fun but it need some more difficulty in the first room.
getting to the door was too easy. maybe adding a mine infrnt of it would force you to dodge the rocket more skillfully than now.
3
it was fun but it need some more difficulty in the first room.
getting to the door was too easy. maybe adding a mine infrnt of it would force you to dodge the rocket more skillfully than now.
3
2009-02-03
Fastest AGD
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2009-02-03
Whoops
*Generally*, not *Generaaly*
and *Criticism*, not *Criticsm*
My comment was full of typos :O
and *Criticism*, not *Criticsm*
My comment was full of typos :O
2009-02-03
i'd like to give you advice
but my advice wouldnt be much use unless its a map focusing on mines (minejumper)
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2009-02-03
Welcome to NUMA
I think you have potential, so I'm going to offer some constructive criticsm:
1) Generaaly don't mix curvy tiles with pointy tiles; everything about these were fine except for the 4- and 8-tiles at the start
2) Put gold in a way that provides an extra challenge for the player. Perhaps putting some in the rocket area would be good, because you would have the rocket following you around.
3) Simplicity is good, but don't forget to make longer maps sometimes too
Anyway, this is good for a first map, probably better than mine ^_^ Keep making maps
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1) Generaaly don't mix curvy tiles with pointy tiles; everything about these were fine except for the 4- and 8-tiles at the start
2) Put gold in a way that provides an extra challenge for the player. Perhaps putting some in the rocket area would be good, because you would have the rocket following you around.
3) Simplicity is good, but don't forget to make longer maps sometimes too
Anyway, this is good for a first map, probably better than mine ^_^ Keep making maps
3
2009-02-03
Ok
It works now...although the switch isn't in the thumbnail either for some reason.
I like its simplicity: the two enemies are adequate for a map as short as this and are well placed.
In fact my only problem with this map is the question mark...it doesn't serve any purpose and really spoils the look of the map.
Impressive debut though! Keep it up!
4/5
I like its simplicity: the two enemies are adequate for a map as short as this and are well placed.
In fact my only problem with this map is the question mark...it doesn't serve any purpose and really spoils the look of the map.
Impressive debut though! Keep it up!
4/5
2009-02-03
sorry
I meant to say "It may be" rather than "I may be".
2009-02-03
It works fine
for me.
try pressing r, and reload the data :3
This map was actually enjoyable, lol.
What? you may ask, how?
The simpicity of it all, was quite fun to speed run.
Ok, welcome to numa,
I liked the smoothy tileset,
I liked the gold
I liked the jump, and how if you didn't jump right you messed up your run.
However, it all seemed a bit easy.
But i guess thats fine, as it's your first map, and you didn't "
SPAM ROCKETZ ZMOZMOGO AND LAZERZ BCZU IF I DU THEY WILL BE LIZEK ZOMG B357 M4P 3V)0)$)RQ)"
i really liked that. 3.5/5 ^ (^ means rated up, as numa no longer supports .5 function)
And again,
Welcome to numa! (sorry for the extra long post :3)
SPEED AGD RARAR
try pressing r, and reload the data :3
This map was actually enjoyable, lol.
What? you may ask, how?
The simpicity of it all, was quite fun to speed run.
Ok, welcome to numa,
I liked the smoothy tileset,
I liked the gold
I liked the jump, and how if you didn't jump right you messed up your run.
However, it all seemed a bit easy.
But i guess thats fine, as it's your first map, and you didn't "
SPAM ROCKETZ ZMOZMOGO AND LAZERZ BCZU IF I DU THEY WILL BE LIZEK ZOMG B357 M4P 3V)0)$)RQ)"
i really liked that. 3.5/5 ^ (^ means rated up, as numa no longer supports .5 function)
And again,
Welcome to numa! (sorry for the extra long post :3)
SPEED AGD RARAR
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2009-02-03
welcome to numa
pretty good for a first map, much better than my first.
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2009-02-03
Where
is the door switch meant to be? I may be my editor playing up but it appears above my map so I can't reach it.
kryX
Highscore
very good for a first map :)