Envy
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| Author | Donfuy |
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| Tags | author:donfuy race rated |
| Created | 2007-11-24 |
| Last Modified | 2007-11-24 |
| Rating |
4 by 7 people.
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| Map Data | |
| Description | RESUBMITTED: I got no comments on this map.
I think it was worth the time doing this map. But still... there are some parts that are too... clean...with nothing special. Please tell me what you think. Enjoy. EDITED: a new start as been created. there were some parts with no flow at all. now those have a little more. |
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2008-08-08
If you do that
I'll stick with numa :P
Oh btw...
Thanks again ;) You gave me strenght to do a map.
Oh btw...
Thanks again ;) You gave me strenght to do a map.
because if you are, then let's set up a deal. if you keep producing races, then i'll keep giving detailed critiques of them until you're really good.
2008-08-08
meh...
I prefer pontual comments on my maps...
I learn better that way :P
Thanks anyway
I learn better that way :P
Thanks anyway
2008-08-07
hey,
if you want *really* constructive stuff, look at the comments on "Wheels Unturned" lol. they're...uhhh....comprehensive.
i'm always glad to give out suggestions! although i'm certainly having to dish out so many essays on how to make good maps that i may just make a general-use thing to give to everybody who wants suggestions.
i'm always glad to give out suggestions! although i'm certainly having to dish out so many essays on how to make good maps that i may just make a general-use thing to give to everybody who wants suggestions.
2008-08-05
this
is too loopy. the tileset also looks boring; and as a general rule of thumb, people should not be able to tell that a map is a race just by looking at the thumbnail (hint, hint). if you want to get better, study races made by destiny, in_dub, bunniesandsheep, etdeshon, and da_man to get an idea of how individual sections of flow should look. try to replicate the style of an author you like. once you're able to consistently make solid maps in that style, mutate the style a bit, and tweak it so that it becomes your own personal style. always change up your style though, so that it doesn't become too monotonous.
for specific suggestions on flow types and all that, see my comments on Wumbla's "Wheels Unturned".
for specific suggestions on flow types and all that, see my comments on Wumbla's "Wheels Unturned".
2007-11-24
I don't like the beginning
mine placement isn't favorable either
2007-11-24
problem
oops
forgot to mention that.
when I do a map I test each part of the map individually. so I did the start and tested it.
in the end, the objects caused a slower movement from the rocket gauss.
(I dunno why I didn't realize that one I tested the full map)
trully sorry
going to edit right now
forgot to mention that.
when I do a map I test each part of the map individually. so I did the start and tested it.
in the end, the objects caused a slower movement from the rocket gauss.
(I dunno why I didn't realize that one I tested the full map)
trully sorry
going to edit right now
im a fairly good player at races (even if i do say so myself) but i found that i get passed that rocket about once in every 20 goes. and after that its only an average race with irritating mines and very easy completion. so 3.5/5 for the race and -.5 for the terrible start
2007-11-24
those 2 mines in the middle
they block the flow!
2007-11-24
those 2 mines in the middle
they block the flow!
2007-11-24
I liked it
But the flow was a bit choppy at times. Some mines were rather irritating than challenging. It was harder than most races, but still entertaining.
3.5 + 0.5 for nice outfit
3.5 + 0.5 for nice outfit
yungerkid
always glad to help.